That seems like a VERY good structure Pulse, good job!
Some minor notes though: if we want to keep it scientific and such, I think we should take out the "dangerousness" and "shield" rating stuff, since it based on possibly biased opinions, and not rock-solid data. Also, we could have a description about the way the enemies move and behave (not on every class, since it doesn't seem to depend much on it). We should also think whether we want to put all the enemies+ranks on the same page, or first give a page that links to the races, and then from there you would be linked to the classes...Maybe the best would be to have all the races on one page, and the ranks on their own pages?
I thought about that, but no one can deny an Elite Ultra is waay more dangerous than an Elite Major. Those guys can Yoink! you up if you're not careful. But no: I don't like Dangerousness either.
Shield strength is a bit more data-based, because we will have the number of shots to take it down. But I would still take it out: Shield strength would only be on Elites, and it scales with rank (except for the SpecOps and Ranger), so it's pretty much something everyone knows right away.
I just wanted something to take vertical space next to the image, you know?
What I thought about is having a Table of Contents like the one below. Everything would be a link, ie, there would be a section to talk generally about Brutes (maybe add
a little fiction) and then the various ranks.
It would ALL be on the same page, because no one wants to go to load the first page, go to "Elites", which has a list of the various ranks, click on "Ultra", wait for the Elite Ultra page to load and then have to go back to check another Elite or a Skirmisher.
I don't really care, though, I just want this done.
I already have in-game images of ALL the different enemies (except the Drone Minor, which I've never seen), so that's pretty much taken care of.
I need you guys to write that text, though! You can't say "boy, I wish we had more content to show 343 and the public how good we are at what we do" and then, when the opportunity arises, bail out!Table of Contents:
Brutes
Chieftain
Captain Major
Minor
Drones
Ultra
???? Major
Minor
???? Elites
BOB
Field Marshall
Zealot
General
Ultra
SpecOps
Ranger
Major
Minor
Grunts
Ultra
SpecOps
Heavy
Major
Minor
Hunters
Jackals
Sniper
Major
Minor
Skirmishers
Champion
Murmillo
Commando
Major
Minor